This is my groups completed preliminary task and you can tell that there are some obvious areas to improve on however i think that it's not too bad in terms of mise en scene, setting and the overall story. The sound is also not too bad given the equipment we could use.
The lighting wasn't a strength as we didn't know how to properly work the lights we used so we made do with alternating lights that took some of the effect away from the scene and looked unprofessional in some areas. It made one scene look different to another and it wasn't symmetrical, making the overall presentation look off.
Also, the camera shots were blurry and this also made it look less professional again. The focus was out in some areas and the differences in shots could be noticed again making it flow less and easy to watch. The editing wasn't too bad as in it flowed well in some areas however there were some times that the scene transitions could be trimmed a bit more to make the continuity in the segment better.
The good bits are the lighting in terms it's originality as not a lot of people would think or actual record their scene in pitch blackness and it would have worked well to add more atmosphere to the recording if we sorted out the problems. The sound was okay considering we only had a camera to record the sound with. You could hear the speech and also not TOO much background noise.
Ryan Clarke- Actor, script writer director
Harry Clarke- Editing
Louis Chamberlain- Camera man
Joe Gamble- Double, camera man
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